Writerly Thinz: Words Of The Day

SUICIDE

Sometimes

The world to stop is all I desire

A breath

To take to stay alive

Other times

The world to stop is what I want

My breath

To take to ever stay still. – Walter Uchenna Ude, @Walt_Shakes

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  1. Yemie

     /  January 20, 2014

    Wow Walter, this is an amazing piece of writing. The ‘uncanny’ way you have with words shines through. This is deep.

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  2. Anyanya

     /  January 25, 2014

    I like the ‘piercing’ form. I like the ‘bandaged wound’, that pain being dabbed. I like this!

    Reply

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